helena fairfax, freelance editor, yorkshire

Helena Fairfax

Writing what you don’t know: how to choose the right career for your characters

Another month, and another authors’ Round Robin! This month author Skye Taylor has set us a thought-provoking topic…

helena fairfax, freelance editor, fiction editor
How do you choose the right career for your characters?

When I first started writing, I wrote what I knew. I’ve worked in a textile mill in Yorkshire. I also spent time as a student in Lyon, a city I grew to love. I combined these two settings in my first novel, The Silk Romance.

My heroine, Sophie, is a student who goes to work in a silk mill in Lyon, where she discovers the owner is a man she’s met before (and that’s where the story takes over from reality…!)

Why does your character’s career matter?

It wasn’t until after I’d written this novel that I began to reflect on the importance of the career choices I’d made for my main characters, and to think much more deeply about them.

I write romantic fiction. One of the areas I think more deeply about now, in my own writing and when editing romance novels for others, is:

Women, careers and power balance

The days when the heroines of romance stayed at home or worked as secretaries until they married are thankfully gone. (For a taster of these novels, try my review of a 1930s’ Mills & Boon romance. Reading In the Name of Love was an eye-opener!)

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In my silk-mill novel, the hero, Jean-Luc, has all the power as a wealthy sporting hero, while Sophie is penniless and has nothing. The ‘billionaire boss’ is still a massively popular trope, as this M&B collection shows.

Nowadays I think very hard before choosing my protagonists’ careers, and try to give an equal balance. An equal power balance generally means equal money, and equal money generally means both hero and heroine have careers that pay a similar wage.

In my novel Felicity at the Cross Hotel,  I deliberately tried to reverse the balance of power, so that in the opening the heroine holds all the money cards. This leads to…

Your character’s career, conflict, and plot opportunities

All stories revolve around conflict. With some stories the conflict comes as a direct result of the career. Many crime novels revolve around a detective’s career, and it’s the crime that provides the plot opportunities.

In romance novels, the conflict is character driven, rather than plot driven.  (That is, the characters’ conflicting goals or beliefs prevent them getting together emotionally until the end of the novel.) Quite often their careers can be that source of conflict.

A couple of examples:

In the brilliant The Hating Game, by Sally Thorn, the hero and heroine work at a publisher’s and are locked in a bitter struggle for the same promotion.

In Emily Henry’s Book Lovers, the hero and heroine are publisher and agent and also rivals. (I loved this novel because it deliberately subverts the small-town trope, in a really funny way, as the heroine loves living the city.)

Your characters’ careers and their personalities

Besides dictating how much money your character earns, their career will influence their world view – and they’ll have chosen a particular job because of their own personality and background. A character who works in home care will have a very different personality to one who works in stocks and shares.

What has made your own character choose their field? What do they enjoy about it? What do they dislike? How does this fit their personality? And how does their job affect the events of the story?

Here are two examples from books I’ve been reading and enjoying recently of how a character’s job informs their personality and affects the plot:

In Claire Keegan’s Small Things Like These, Bill Furlong owns a coal and timber merchant’s and he employs staff. His job shows he’s done well for himself, and his staff respect him. He works hard and earns a solid living for his family, which shows he’s a decent guy. He also delivers locally, and it’s the local deliveries that advance the plot, as he gets to know everyone in the neighbourhood.

In Francesca Segal’s Welcome to Glorious Tuga, Charlotte Walker is an academic studying tortoises on a tiny remote island. She thinks it’s the perfect job, as she doesn’t like socialising and prefers her own company. What she doesn’t realise is that the island has a strong community where everyone knows everyone. Gradually, she’s forced to overcome her shyness and reserve.

Careers and research

What if the perfect career for your hero and/or heroine is one you know nothing about?

Some tips for whittling down the wealth of information online:

Image by Gerd Altmann from Pixabay
  • LinkedIn can be a great starting point. People often share experiences on this site, and also links to industry blog posts
  • I’ve found it helps to join social media groups, such as the ones of Facebook. Reddit is also a mine of info
  • Check out the hashtags for your career on Insta/Threads/Bluesky/X
  • Check out YouTube channels
  • Look for podcasts focusing on the industry

When I first started out writing I felt nervous about contacting people directly for help with research – especially as I write romantic fiction, the most looked-down-on of genres.

But for Felicity at the Cross Hotel, I struggled with a few of the details for my hero’s career. I found nothing would help but to contact a group of freshwater divers in the Lake District. The group were massively helpful, and the men were particularly enthusiastic about being the models for a romantic hero :) We’ve stayed friends, and I even got a write-up in the local press.

So if you’re struggling to fill in the background to your character’s career, don’t be afraid to reach out. You never know where it may lead!

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If you’re a writer, how do you go about choosing your characters’ careers? If you’re a reader, are there any careers that would particularly draw you to a novel?

I’m looking forward to reading the other authors’ take on this topic. Please click on the links below for my fellow authors in the Round Robin.

Anne Stenhouse  http://annestenhousenovelist.wordpress.com

Victoria Chatham  http://www.victoriachatham.com

Connie Vines  http://mizging.blogspot.com/

Dr. Bob Rich   https://wp.me/p3Xihq-3m7

Diane Bator  https://escapewithawriter.wordpress.com/

Marci Baun  http://www.marcibaun.com/blog/

Skye Taylor http://www.skye-writer.com/blogging_by_the_sea

16 responses to “Writing what you don’t know: how to choose the right career for your characters”

  1. Dr Bob Rich Avatar

    Helena, I took a side trip to your Mills & Boon review and it cheered up my day. :)
    This is your usual wide-ranging and helpful examination of a subject. If I were a new writer, it would be of enormous help.

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    1. Helena Fairfax Avatar

      So glad you enjoyed the M&B review, Bob. That book is a rollercoaster! How things have changed in almost a hundred years. (Although sadly, we even now still have a long way to go. I wonder what reviews will be like for our generation of romance novels.)
      Thanks so much for your kind comment. I really enjoyed this topic, and our Round Robins.

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  2. Annika Perry Avatar

    Helena, yeah, equality in careers in romantic novels! That is a huge step and although there is still a place for the traditional rich man/poor woman, those set in modern times and even turning them on their head are playing a huge role. I love how you even got an article out of your research – they didn’t tempt you in for a dive?! 😀😀 Many thanks for this highly informative and thought- provoking post and wishing you a lovely weekend. Annika

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    1. Helena Fairfax Avatar

      They tried to tempt me, Annika! I have dived once, in the Caribbean. The fresh water seems much murkier and darker in the Lakes, but they dived regularly and they loved it.
      Thanks so much for your kind comment, and for taking the time to drop in. Have a great weekend! x

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  3. Connie Vines Avatar
    Connie Vines

    Helena an Enjoyable and very an informative post. While Mills and Boon releases seldom appear in the States (unless released via a Harlequin Line) I visited the link :).

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    1. Helena Fairfax Avatar

      Thanks so much for dropping in, Connie. I’ve enjoyed this month’s topic. Thanks for checking out the review. I hope you enjoyed it!

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  4. jameschristie466 Avatar
    jameschristie466

    When not lying drunk under a table, I write lazily from life!

    In the case of “The Legend of John Macnab”, John Sandiman was a dour and disillusioned Glaswegian librarian prone to drowning his sorrows in a bottle of Glenmorangie and, apart from the whisky, that was true of me at the time.

    He was also locked in memory of his lost West Highland love (don’t get me started on THAT one…) who once lived in Glenfinnan and worked at the visitor centre while his sarcastic but chirpy library assistant and colleague tried cheerily to bounce him out of his blues.

    At the time, my main concern about that lot was that I didn’t care about any of them (too much Glenmorangie?) and would have happily thrown them headlong into a volcanic pit steaming with magma if it would have advanced the plot.

    Years and many more bottles of Glenmorangie later, I was therefore pleased but surprised to receive an adulatory review proclaiming that “Macnab” had:

    “Wonderfully atmospheric and vivid characters!”

    Don’t know where THAT came from, so I can only recommend that young authors work hard, do their editing, carry out meticulous approach and if all else fails, watch “The Crow Road” and hit the Glenmorangie like there’s no tomorrow!

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    1. Helena Fairfax Avatar

      These are some of the best tips on the writing approach I’ve heard, James. I love them. And they clearly worked for you! Thanks for another great comment!

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  5. Skye-writer Avatar

    Great ideas on how to learn about careers and jobs you are not familiar with. And good examples of how the career itself can help drive the plot or the conflict.

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    1. Helena Fairfax Avatar

      Thanks very much, Skye. Thanks for dropping in – and for setting another interesting topic!

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  6. Victoria Chatham Avatar
    Victoria Chatham

    I loved your 1930s Mills & Boon post. Oh my goodness, did that make me laugh. It reminded me of a line in my mum’s library book, the title of which I don’t remember, from when I was about twelve – ‘Sylvia stepped into the bedroom, and she wasn’t wearing a nightgown.’ Shock, horror! Thank you for the book comparisons, I shall have to look them up.

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    1. Helena Fairfax Avatar

      That’s really funny about the library book! :D I find it fascinating to see how social history has changed through romance novels. They show a side of history that isn’t found in most history books. So glad you liked the review. Thanks for dropping in, and for your comment!

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  7. Esther O'Neill Avatar

    Laughing – for the first time today – brilliant
    Very helpful guidance, Helena, but first, the reason for laughter.. – and Victoria’s story…

    One very stormy night, drought breaking dramatically, very all dark and drenched stranger, asking for refuge in my tent, at 1.a.m. –
    No idea what Sylvia’s excuse was, but I’d dressed for the heatwave..
    A sleeping bag was more than enough.

    Back to the subject – Key character in my new book ( out now) works in environmental protection/flooding. I approached a few scientists for help . Really helpful , and I suppose volunteering was inevitable…
    Invites to great parties too.

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    1. Helena Fairfax Avatar

      Your story sounds like a great meet cute :D And now I want to know…why did he not have his own tent?? This question would be a great hook for readers. I hope you write this story one day!
      Many congratulations on your release. I love the career you’ve chosen for your character. I imagine it offers plenty of potential for drama – also for character friendships/romance, with the parties. I hope the volunteering provides inspiration for lots more novels, and wishing you all the best with your writing.
      Thanks so much for dropping in – and for your entertaining comment!

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  8. Esther O'Neill Avatar

    His tent had washed away – dramatic rainstorm,
    Needn’t have worried he’d wake and spot my frantic efforts to dress.. ( how to dress for a first date ?
    Might sleep through if a passing F 35 hit our roof

    River taming Rob ? Meets his match when she brings three kids , and their support to view an osprey nest, He first sees her pushing a wheelchair.

    Jo’s moved from teaching IT to enabling technology.

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    1. Helena Fairfax Avatar

      I love the drama of the rainstorm <3 And I totally love a hero (or heroine, for that matter) who meets their match. It sounds like an intriguing read, and a great premise. Congratulations again on release!

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